Example of a “Bad” Outline

 

Topic: Robert E. Lee

 

Thesis: Although Southerners like to portray General Robert E. Lee as the best general in American history, his military strategy actually lost the war for the South.

 

I.     Personal Background

A.   Before The War

B.   Personal Philosphy

C.   Main Events during the War

D.   After the War

II.  Aggressive Military Strategy

A.   Antietam

B.   Gettysburg

C.   Wilderness-Petersburg Campaign

III.           Alternative Strategies

A.   He could have fought a defensive war

B.   He could have more support to the Western Theater

 

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